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Van-san Erza Isadora :: S-Ranked
Posts : 17 Join date : 2011-09-15 Location : Stalking with Slenderman
| Subject: Takasugi, Van Fri 16 Sep 2011, 6:56 am | |
| Name: Van Takasugi Nickname: The Thunder of the Mist, Van-san Age: 23 Gender: Male Rank: S-Rank Former Rank: ANBU Village: Kiri Former Village: Kiri Affiliations: Akatsuki Elements: Main: Lightning Subs: Water Kekke Genkai:Personality: Calm, distant, and kind are words that can be used to describe Van. Odd for an Akatsuki member. He is usually seen not talking or smiling, giving him the appearance of being cold but he's actually very nice. When members mess up, he will go out of his way to help them. Even with enemies, he shows generosity by giving the opponent a chance to run away instead of fight. With Jinchuuriki, Van will offer reasoning as an alternative to using force, but always ends up fighting anyhow. All this niceness means nothing though during a fight. Van then becomes emotionless, doing what needs to be done to accomplish his goals for Akatsuki. He is very devoted to the Akatsuki and its leader, and will not stand for any disrespect or threat to it. In his eyes, Akatsuki is perfect, and anyone who opposes it is ignorant. Van lastly, when comfortable, likes chasing girls a lot. He loves woman-kind almost as much as Akatsuki and hates womanizers. He describes himself as a gentleman and helps any girl he sees who is trouble. The Akatsuki Leader apparently has Van's complete admiration. In contrast to this love of women, Van has a large disdain for mankind. He doesn't have ill will towards any specific men, but rather hates men in general. Appearance: - Spoiler:
Bio: Genin Arc: Van's life was boring. So very boring. An uneventful life is all Van had leading up to his becoming a Genin. Normal birth...normal parents...normal childhood...normal Academy grades. So far, it seemed his Genin life would be no different. His Jounin squad leader was a Chunin with no exceptional jutsu or no fearful name to him. His male squad member was a dunce, more annoying than comical. The female in his group wasn't even all too attractive. Of course, he didn't see himself as high and mighty either. He was a punk with a habit for getting into trouble. Van never had any drive to pay attention to his teachers' lessons and he passed the Academy by cheating. All this was an attempt to make life more interesting. Missions were rather boring too. Like finding cats or helping deliver letters. THis boring life was made more depressive by eternal shroud of mist over the village. Van couldn't even see what life was like out of the village. He hoped that by becoming a Chunin, he'd get out-of-village missions, and with that as his goal, he trained hard for the Chunin Exams, but just barely passed it. Chunin Arc: Van was wrong. So very wrong. His Chunin career was 10 times worse. As he became a Chunin, his first mission was to help the Kage with paperwork. He was stuck in an office 24/7 and was bored out of his mind. The only thing he looked forward to each day was the end, when he had to turn in the paperwork to the Mizukage, and was able to chat with her for a couple minutes. She seemed just as bored as him yet she held a deep sense of pride for the village. Van admired her greatly and worked very hard so he could finish work faster and get a longer time to talk to her. After a while, knowing how bored Van was, she assigned Van in the ANBU, finally giving him the chance to leave and see the outside world. ANBU Arc: Van made a mistake. A very large mistake. His mistake was believing that the world outside the village was wonderful. It was a simple mission, to keep surveillance on a foreign lord who was believed to be double crossing Kirigakure. Along the way, Van witnessed nothing but violence and stealing. He couldn't understand how people could sleep at night knowing the terrible things they did. While spying on their target, they quickly confirmed his treachery. He was selling their secrets to the highest bidder of dirty criminals. With that money he gave himself more power and bought women, defiling them and then killing them. After a month, their mission was to report their findings to the Mizukage. But Van couldn't let this man continue to live. He broke away from his group and violently killed the the lord. Having sabotaged the mission, the ANBU proceeded to arrest Van but he escaped after lightly injuring them. Van was classified as a rouge ninja the next day, for assassinating a lord. Missing nin and Akatsuki Arc: Van's choice. It was the right one. He questioned his descision for a couple days but soon realized that, he wasn't a missing nin, he was a free shinobi. Van took advantage of this by travelling throughout the world. He found that it truly was a wonderful world, only inhabited by evil people. Those who were truly good people were stepped on and bullied. So for a couple of years, Van became a vigilante for hire. He charged only the amount of money that he would need to buy an inexpensive dinner, and in return assualted, blackmailed, and murdered the corrupt. He felt good, knowing he was slowly purifying the world. In time, the name of an organization caught his ear, and he joined quickly after hearing their motives. Peace. Surely Akastuki could create this. After weeks of gathering information, he found and confronted the leader of the organization. She was a beautiful red head not much older than himself. She was rather emotionless, but after some coercing agreed to let Van join. He now was living happily and had an objective. To help this black robed group reach their ultimate goal of world domination. RP Sample: - Spoiler:
The Thunder of the Mist, wearing the infamous black robes spangled with red clouds, made his way into the Land of Wind. He had been travelling for quite some time, and was worn out and tired. But travellers would know that he was moving at a very fast pace. He had made in the time of two days, what should have taken six. It was his duty to capture the One-Tails. He refused to rest until he had accomplished this. THe faster that the 9 tailed beasts were captured, the closer the world was to peace. Van actually had no idea of how this would be done. He didn't question the Akatsuki. To him, Akatsuki word was final. The world would soon be led by this great organization, so what kind of role model would he be if he questioned its authority? Sand in his boots and hair and the sun beating down on his Akatsuki robes which covered a fur coat and shirt. Maybe he should rest after all.
He found a nice onsen, rested, and continued his journey, leaving at midnight and not helping himself to the luxuries of the bath house. His nice personality did prompt the manager to give him some bread and water. Soon Van was completley surrounded by moonlit desert. There was sand everywhere, giving Van a desolate and nervous feeling. "...am I going the right way...? Maybe I should've asked for directions...it is called the Village Hidden in the Sand..." Van said to himself. He wouldn't give up though...not until he captured Shukaku for his beloved organization. After looking around his environment, Van picked a direction and followed it, hoping he was right.
Turns out he was. Van arrived at Sunagakure in the early morning, around 6:00 am. Most people woud be sleeping by now, but there was sure to be gaurds on the rooftops. So Van kept to the ground, and began searching. He'd be looking for a shinobi with a gourd of sand and black rings around their eyes, as was accostomed to Jinchuriki who were possed by the one tails. However, the Jinchuriki found Van first, which Van became aware of as waves of sand began flying around him, trying to crush him. Van rolled out and looked up at a red haired kid with black rings around his eyes. Instead of pulling out his scythe, Van stood up and bowed. "My name is Van Takasugi, representing the Akastuki Organization. Everyday we strive towards the ultimate goal of peace, and it is on this day that, on behalf of the Akatsuki, I ask for your cooperation by letting me capture you." Van barely finished his introduction before more sand flew at him. Guess that was a no. Van sighed...the answer was always no.
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| | | Van-san Erza Isadora :: S-Ranked
Posts : 17 Join date : 2011-09-15 Location : Stalking with Slenderman
| Subject: Re: Takasugi, Van Sun 18 Sep 2011, 10:40 am | |
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Posts : 209 Join date : 2009-08-28 Age : 35 Location : Take the Never Sidewalk and keep going till you Reach Forever
| Subject: Re: Takasugi, Van Sun 18 Sep 2011, 11:33 am | |
| I like your diction and it was a very interesting background but there is one thing that you must explain.
Have you ever heard the saying "One does not walk into..." Blah blah blah, I forgot the rest. My point is that you finished your History without saying how you got into the Akatsuki. I'm not trying to be 'That' guy but I just want you to specify so our other admins could agree on this as well. Just make up a fake, 3 sentenced or more, story on how the Akatsuki leader let you enter. Remember it is only this part, I approve of the rest. | |
| | | Van-san Erza Isadora :: S-Ranked
Posts : 17 Join date : 2011-09-15 Location : Stalking with Slenderman
| Subject: Re: Takasugi, Van Sun 18 Sep 2011, 12:45 pm | |
| Ok thank you~ I'll get to it ^^ | |
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Posts : 209 Join date : 2009-08-28 Age : 35 Location : Take the Never Sidewalk and keep going till you Reach Forever
| Subject: Re: Takasugi, Van Sun 18 Sep 2011, 12:48 pm | |
| Thanks for being Cooperative. Message me when you've finished and I'll get right to checking your application. | |
| | | WhoDidWhat Jounin : Weaponry Master
Posts : 209 Join date : 2009-08-28 Age : 35 Location : Take the Never Sidewalk and keep going till you Reach Forever
| Subject: Re: Takasugi, Van Sun 18 Sep 2011, 2:02 pm | |
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